Monday 14 September 2009

Part 2 of Chapter 15.

"She's nothing but a hoodrat!", Michelle's mum sobbed, "I should have never have let her get involved in Michelle's life."
"Oh no," Gavin said, "Dont say that- she was trying to help Michelle get over what happened to her as well.
"Maybe Michelle's mum is right," Sharon said looking at Sandra, "The twins were almost killed because of her."
"Sitting here talking about how bad Chelle is won't help us find Michelle- will it," Sandra yelled.
"She's still a dirty whore!," Michelle's mum sobbed.
"Shut your bludclart woman!", Gavin yelled at he, just as he was getting ready to throw dome some more pa-twar, the phone rang.
"Hello is this The Meyers Household?".
"Yes- yes it is- whose speaking please?".
"I'm a police lady who recently moved to this country after obtaining my visa."
"What has that got to do with anything," Gavin asked, "why have you called."
The police lady took a deep breath, "We have Michelle- she is safe."
"And Rochelle?".
"She fi dead, Rochelle fi dead."

33 comments:

  1. how can she die... how plz explain. aint she ment to be tellin the story?????

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  2. huh!!! dead???
    nooooooo

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  3. is that it??? it is finished??? damn nooooooooooo

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  4. dat cnt b how it finished no way KMT im so vex if dats da case KMT it betta carry on its proa juicy n its keepin me goin at work!

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  5. WELL NO! SHE DIDNT SAY ROCHELLE WAS DEAD, SHE SAID ROCHELLE 'FI DEAD' MEANING ROCHELLE IS DUE TO DIE LIKE THEY ARE GOING TO KILL HER!!!

    but pls can we have more looool x

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  6. are u being serious he aint dead is she??? i swear i dnt read books r stories but i be on this story like a rash it got me hooked

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  7. Oh I reckon she said she is dead so she can go away and forgetand she gona start again????????/ maybe

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  8. dis getting stupid now!

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  9. LMAOOOOOOOOO @ Pa-twar

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  10. its lies ders no way shes dead

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  11. doubt she's dead....prob gonna be another twist or sumthing

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  12. this story is truly beatiful and bare emosh and knowing the fact that is could be tru really makes you question what type of mad messed up world we are living in

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  13. fi dead????????????

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  14. I NEED MORE.....

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  15. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ARE YOU JOKING....THAT DONT MAKE NO SENSE IT WOULD HAVE MADE MORE SENSE IF MONIQUE HAD BEEN SHOT ON ACCIDENT OR SOMETHING!

    NOW WHATS GONNA HAPPEN???

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  16. i bet its not really a police lady who "got her visa" loooool
    must b monique ...

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  17. are u for real
    is that how it really endz?

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  18. What the heck does "I'm a police lady who recently moved to this country after obtaining my visa" Have to do with anything? How did she get involved? Sort it out Author!

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  19. Shes not dead...at the top it states rochelle is the author, i reckon the phone call is from Monique!

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  20. story keeps switching. sometimes Chelle's character is telling the story and sometimes its a narrative.
    plot is getting ridiculous but im gonna keep reading regardless!

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  21. i got baffled who is sharon....

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  22. pleaaaase post more im so hooked!

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  23. Sharon is Sandra's younger sister, they said in chapter 15 part 1

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  24. WTF they only said the policewoman came from another country so that she could say "FI DEAD"
    foolS LOOOOOOOL

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  25. if sandra is from guyana doesnt dat mean shes black? sharice said she hates mixed race kids so isnt gavin white?but yet gavin is sayin shut ya bludclart woman? what white man says dat?

    SW

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  26. LOL at above. Anyways I think it must be Monique who called

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  27. This story is too good! love it!! pls don't end it now!!

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  28. "she fi dead." LOOOOOOOOOL

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  29. lol@ moved her after obtaining my visa

    this is 2 much omg lol

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  30. lmfao 222222222222222 funny lol! da comments are beta den da story

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  31. died of cum poisoning

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