Wednesday 16 December 2009

Part 1 of the final chapter.

The Indian girl had her hand around my neck.
"Ur fuckin spot on Nomi," she said lookin at the lift which was only on the floor that we were on by a quarter, "its tripti."

I looked up at her and started crying, she slapped me.
"leave her alone!", i heard rochelle say.
"nah nah it cant be- ur dead-," i heard nomi say, "youre supposed to be dead."
then the indian girl picked me up and sat me on a chair and mouthed, "stay here."
then she said, "rochelle's supposed to be dead too- but tru say shes lying right there nexr to you- u lot must be fucked up by now- that mustve been a nasty fall."

When the lift had sped down, it stopped halfway and was in between floors and i felt hands pull me out, it was this tripti girl.
"You think rochelles the only one they hooked up," she said.
i heard rochelle say, "dont hurt michelle."
then tripti laughed, "you sound EXACTLY how i thought you would- i heard you're a boom ting- if we were in different circumstances me u and nomi could have had a group ting- but den again she IS your half sister- so thats kinda rank."

i was cryin- i was so cold and i could smell smoke- we were on the 10th floor i think and i i think that fire had died out by the time it reached the fifteenth floor cos i couldnt feel its heat anymore.

"You set me up Nomi- faisal and his boys raped me, fucked me up and left me for dead- i woke up in some ditch gettin my tits nibbled on by some perveted fish- i walked all the way to the police station and when i got there that James guy was there and i told him everything about how corrupt Omara was, about how rochelle was still alive- bout how faisal and his man set me up- and you know what he did- he called in some head of the force and they told me to hide- get a new identity cos they wanted faisal and his boys for pen so that Omara would be forced to try and help them and when he did that would be their evidence to arrest him for corruption BUT YOU TOLD THEM THAT GAVIN MIGHT HAVE DONE it- and when he couldnt give an alibi they had to arrest him and THAT FUCKING BITCH Sandra said he had violent tendencies."

i could hear nomi whimpering.

tripti continued, "and so there was nuthin they could do- ive been living in bengal in some womens shelter all this time and my family- family wanted to bury me- to see my body but the feds had to lie," she started sobbing then, "they had to say my body was so fucked up that they wouldnt wanna see it- and then do u know what happened Nomi- my nan had a heartattack."
tripti fell to the floor and started bawlin, "she had a heartattack when they showed her the body of some other indian chick who some guy had mutilated- and she throt- my whole family thort it was me and my nan died on the spot- her heart gave in BECAUSE YOU set me up."


"why are you back?".

"which one of u hoes said that," tripti said.
"me," rochelle said, "why the fuck are you back?"

"ask your friend James- i came to a deal with the feds- they said that i can come back and say i went missing and that it was their mistake for finding the wrong body- i can go back to my family and Gavin will get out as long as I testify against O'mara and tell the court that you're still alive- James set this whole thing up."

"He wouldn't have," rochelled screamed.

"dum bitch- whyd u think he let you come back- people have seen you rochelle-uve been on cctv- the people who set up your new identity are the corrupt ones in the feds- they're not allowed to do what they did- its against the law to fake your own death- and thats what they helped you do."

"but if u testify- monique, kieran and rico will get let out of pen- so would Gavin,"nomi said.

"You catch on fast," Tripti laughed. "Is he up there?", she said looking at me.

"hes dead,"i cried, "he burnt."

"aaaawwwww- your daddys dead little chelle chelle- your fuckin perverted daddy got toasted," then she laughed.

"leave her the fuck alone," i heard rochelle say.
tripti walked over to the lift button and pressed the button. the lift slowly came down and i could see rochelle and nomi standin there side by side covered in blood and bruises.


nomi started bawlin when she saw tripti and her eyes were sayin sorry.
"how did u get here," rochelle asked.
"i followed nomi here- when they kidnapped her from your dutty nans house- i followed- i was originally gonna run up in the house and fuck you up nomi but them guys beat me to it."

the lift jerked.
rochelle and nomi tried to jump out but tripti pulled out a strap.
"stay in the lift," she said.
"its gonna break and kill dem!," i screamed.
"thats the point," tripti said, "thats the fucking point."

22 comments:

  1. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
    U KILLIN ME '
    U FUCKIN KILLIN ME
    UR TRYING TO KILL ME

    DIS STORY IS 222222222222 MUCH- LIKE HOW MICHELLE IS NARRATING NOW- CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS.
    TRIPTIS A BAD BITCH.

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  2. So the buildign has been burning for how many hours now, and there is no fire engines coming down???

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  3. that mus be some pretty huge buildin for the fire to actually run out of oxygen to burn itslef off of.

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  4. lmaoooo swear dwn i stayed awake untill 4:50 to finish this song an it aint even finished KMT...gosh this is arrddd bodie maynnnnn...cant wait 4 the rest!

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  5. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARD!
    iF I WERE tripti id be pissed off to- ur best friend tried to get u killed- u had to go live in bengal and ur nan died cos she THORT she saw ur dead body, dicked ting.
    tru say these bitches can never die tho- i want whatever they eat cos these bitches could be in a planecrash and fall 850 ft from the sky and land on their feet and then on the way home on the top of a truck leaving heathrow they could get shot at ten times by osama bin laden and rip the bullets out and then go ravin after.

    yes- i want whatever they eat.

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  6. Even if this is the final chapter..... no doubt everyone else on here would want you to write more stories like this!!

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  7. they eat loadsa dyck! lol

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  8. OMG!!! This shit is toooooo funny,swear down, been readin this since it started and just had to catch up on like half of the story,i cannot believe its come to this boi, bring on the finale!!!!

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  9. looooooooooooool the comment above gave me so much joke had to get a rating ... this story is seriouussssss gwarn writer

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  10. LOVE ITTT!
    IF YOU LOVE "MEMOIRS OF A LONDON SKET" - JOIN THE FB GROUP:
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  11. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARD!
    iF I WERE tripti id be pissed off to- ur best friend tried to get u killed- u had to go live in bengal and ur nan died cos she THORT she saw ur dead body, dicked ting.
    tru say these bitches can never die tho- i want whatever they eat cos these bitches could be in a planecrash and fall 850 ft from the sky and land on their feet and then on the way home on the top of a truck leaving heathrow they could get shot at ten times by osama bin laden and rip the bullets out and then go ravin after.

    yes- i want whatever they eat.

    17 December 2009 02:54

    lol cock?

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  12. LMAO They should be recruited in the Military or summin DAmn

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  13. what happened to part 2 of the final chapter??? you did advertise that it would be posted on 31st at 23:59!!!!!

    I'm still waiting!!!!!

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  14. Wait! thought da final chapter was coming 31st?!?! Wat happened?!

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  15. Where is the final part? I thought it was goin up NYE???

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  16. WHERE IS THE FINAL CHAPTER???!!!

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  17. i swear my lady or man is takin the piss why does she keep doin this either finish the srory or dont just hurry and make decision
    so i can stop checkin every second to see if somethin new has been added

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  18. So wheres da rest?! it was meant 2b available 4read on da 31st!

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  19. Please i need more ive been waiting for 20days now it can't just end like this!!!!!!!!!!

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  20. when next part gonnna come out me nd my friend christabel been waittin 4 timmee!

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  21. "awwwww your daddys dead little chelle chelle your perverted dady got toasted"

    this bit fuckin cracked me up man LMFAO

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  22. LMFAO that perverted fish nibbling on my tits. gollddd man.

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