Monday 19 October 2009

Nomi Part 13

BAM.
I fell to da ground, i could see blood coming from my nose and ahmed standing above me with the vase in his hand.
I looked up at Faisal- he punched shirley and said to ahmed, "well done bruv," then turned to shirley and said, "wheres all the money durty nigger- fuckin tell us or we'll give you a little taster of what we do to black bitches who get our dicks hard."
Shirley cried looking at me and den grandad, "theres one thousand in my chest of drawers- i was savin it to go back home with rupert," she burst into tears. faisal kicked her face and ran upstairs.
my head was throbbin and i was feelin light headed, i saw the gun nex to me- i tried to grab it but one of the guys stepped on my hand, took it and held it to my head, "dum bitch." my spirit could fell grandads love for me leavin- dis was all my fault- he was dead cos i had gotten involvd wiv dese animals.
Faisal ran down an said, "pick up da sket and put her in the car- darrens waitin for us."
"what about the gran'ma?", ahmed said. faisal looked at grandads body and den shirley,
"we'll leave her to fuck her dead man," he laughed. shirley vomited, faisal laughed, ahmed picked me up and put me over his back and pushed me into the back of the whip, "shirley," i called.
she crawled to grandads body and held him to her chest.
Faisal disconnected all the phones and said to her, "call da police and we'll come back and finish where i started." he kicked grandads body den ran into the car.
dere was two cars.
i was in the back wiv ahmed and i fink some guy called Mo and Faisal was in the passenger seat and some ova guy was drivin, in the car behind us were the ova man.

i was liteheaded- i could feel blood rushin from my head and down my back.
"you did a dumb fing nomi- tellin darren aboutme saying i ws gonna kill him." faisal said lookin back at me and den he turned to da guy drivin and said, "take the backroutes in case people see dis bitch bleding- we dont need a routine check cos i didnt take this route to be checked."

"so youre actually gonna pay darren a grand faisal?", ahmed asked puttin his hand on ma pussy, "hell fink your a pussy."
faisal said, "bruv- id rather look like a pussy on road dan a pussy in pen cos den all da guys in pen will fuck me- cos they like pussies- if he says shit about Jermaine or tripti were done for- Omara can only do so much."

grandad was dead and all i could fink of was his lifeless body in shirleys arms, i wanted to die and so i was happy as i felt my head gettin weak and my body gettin numb- dere was no point- grandad was all i had- and now he was dead cos of dese pricks. i could smell their dirt and it made me sick, God knew dat if i had a machete i would have sliced dese fuckers up- come like Sweeney Todd.
I knew wherewe was headin- we were headin souf and it was a suprise to me dat dese dum fuckers didnt seem to be shook.
dat prick darren had snitched- even tho i was tryin to help him and as i felt the numbness in my my head get stronger i said, "you man are gonna have to kill me."

"what did u say bitch?", faisal asked.
"If you man dont kill me- im going to find every single one of you and chop your fuckin balls off, you need to kill me rite nw cos if you dont ill find you and make all of you pay for what u did to my grandad."

dey all burst out laughin, "ahmed u knocked her head too hard man- shes fuckin lost it," Mo said.
Ahmed hit my head, i was satin between Mo and ahmed wiv my hair over my face and blood runnin down from my nose and head.
"you don't get it do you," i said, "you lot have killed de only person i had left- and so when if you dont kill me now- i'll get u," i turned to ahmed and said, "ill cut your tits off," then turned to mo and said, "i'll cut your black toes off," den i looked to da driver and said, " i dont know u," den i turned to faisal and said, "im gonna come 2 ur yard and fuck u up so bad ull die with ur mouth wide open and den ill fry sausages put dem in ur mouth and den stitch ur mouth closed."

Ahmed gave me one dirty box, "PORK IS FORBIDDEN."
I looked up and licked da blood from my lip, "thats rich coming from you fatty."
"dis bitch is pissin me off man!," mo said, "come we give her what shes askin for."
"we have to meet darren in half an hour," faisal said, "we'll deal wiv her whn we're done."

we got to some old garage, it was old and grey and deserted. the man behind us arrived as well. den darren walked over to the car, faisal rolled down the window.
"kl bruv," he said to darren. darren nodded at all of us and shook his head at me.
"you brought da sket?".
Faisal said, "we brought her as a peace offering,"
Darren shook his hand, "got about 20 man inside who wanna fuck dis hoe."
everyone laughed, "should be fun," faisal said.
"Come inside," darren said.
they all got out of the car, ahmed grabbed me and pulled me out. i was dragged by my hair into the garage.
it smelled of weed.
there were so many guys- about 50 guys jus watchin.
all of dem nodded at faisal and his boys. darren said, "we got some drinks- help yourselves innit," then he turned to the 50 guys and said, "dese man are gonna be our boys now innit- beef is squashed everyone introduceyourself."
the guys got up and started chattin to faisal and his man whilst darren looked at me and said, "you told me u didnt know where shawna went u fuckin liar- quebec innit- she told me u knew- shes comin back to me."
i said nuthin.
den he called faisal over.
"bruv- i dont even want the grand yahno- i wanted 2 c if i cld trust u," darren said, "i was never gonna snitch- why would I- Jermaine was an informer snitchin on my cousins- you did me a favour by duppying him, haha- faisal i like you man- dis is why its important us lot are cool- fink about it- tink how big we can be in a few years time- ive got all da affiliates of ssk and uve got all da arabs- we're unstoppable bruv."

faisal spudded him, darren continued, "we need to start sumtin big so when were about 30 we can have the youngers shottin for us- we cant be 30 years old and be still walkin on road." what the fuck was this guy on.
"me and u shld bang dis hoe 2gever as bruvas man," faisal said lookin at me.
"kl," darren said, "Oi u man!," he said 2 his boys, "me and faisal are gonna take care of dis sket- u man enjoy yourselves."

darren punched me and he and faisal pushed me into a room. darren locked the door.
"take off your clothes bitch," i began to undress.
darren was standin behind faisal.
and den de gunshots came.
"what the fuck was that!", faisal shouted.
darren smiled and opend the door, faisal ran out.
all his boys on the floor, bullets to the head, to the neck.
Faisal turned to Darren and said, "you set me up."
I trembled as i saw all dead bodies and darrens boys standin over dem.
"I didnt care about jermaine- i didnt give a shit about the asian chick- but when u man try kill me- nah nah never dat."
Faisal burst into tears at the sight of his friends dead, bleeding onto each other.
then all of darren's boys turned to faisal.
Faisal got on his knees, "please darren- please,"
Darren looked to me and said, "what should we do wiv him?"
I looked at faisal, his eyes were tryin to beg but he knew dere would be no point.
i looked around at the black boys, in the three striped hoodies- the cainrows, the shapeups, the slang and the red eyes and then i looked at the guns in their hands my eyes teared up. i want my grandad.
"gimme a gun," i whispered.
Faisal wept, Darren laughed and handed me a whip.
"you know how to use it?", Darren said.
"my heart does."
I pointed the gun, "open your fuckin mouth," i whispered. he wept. "suck the gun- give it brain," i said.
all the guys started laughin, "sick chick," i heard darren said.
"ah," someone whimpered. it was ahmed- he was climbin over mos body. I shot him.
"fat shit."
faisal wept, "you heard me," i said, "suck it."
i had my finger on the trigger as faisal was suckin the 9. "did you learn that from me?", i whispered. Darren laughed and kissed my head, "me and u need to get 2gever, fuck shawna."
I smiled.
Faisal looked up at me, his snot and tears ran onto the whip, "lick it up bitch," i smiled wipin the bloodoff my nose.
den i looked at him and i knew it. i knew wat was gonna happen and i didnt stop him, because i wanted it to.
the knife jammed into my stomach and faisals bloodyhands screamed murder as i fell back onto the ground.
i heard the bullets tear through faisal as i hit the ground.
i saw gold and blue and purple and then i saw red and then purple again- a deep purple and then nothing. nothing at all.













































































































"You have half an hour to visit your inmate- if the inmate begins to behave in a way which we may deem dangerous then we'll have to ask you to leave."
I nodded and put on my sunglasses, i ran my fingers through my short hair as I walked in, there he was- the bastard who saw nothing wrong with fucking and then killing some 18 year old sket when his wife was raising his kids and expectin one on the way.
I sat opposite him.
"So you're my lawyer?" he said, "I thought I asked for Bernstein- who the hell are you?".
I took off my glasses and looked da fucker in the eye.
He jumped back.
"Yes it is," I said, "Yes it is."






Le Fin.














Nomi sat in her wheelchair looking out of the hospital window into the clear blue day. Her right eye still partially blind and her body exhausted from the anti biotics they had pumped into her system.
She heard footsteps walk into the room.
"Who's there?", she called spinning her wheelchair round.
It was the bullet that did all the talking- right out of the clean black gun and into the flesh that so many boys had touched.
"One down- one to go."

59 comments:

  1. this jst gets better!!!!!

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  2. ROCCCCCCCCCCCCCHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLEE!

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  3. Im in love- this blog is the one.
    what a way to end it!!!
    this is the hood sin city

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  4. whattttttttt?
    i really dint get the last bit, im so confused?!? who was that? & what were they goin on about???
    please someone explain it to mee??? lol

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  5. seriously ur killin me this is too much!!! cnt wait 4 nxt chapter!

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  6. omfg its rochelle

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  7. loooool siiiiiiiiiiiiik 2 bluudnnARRRT yoo dis a stoorryyy maaaaaaaaaaaaadddd mi love itt baadd.The pperson above, this was rochelle checking in tink Gavin at the prison Gavin is the one who had two kids for sandra but obviously gavin dun a ting wid Tripti omis close frend waatttttta piece a mix upppp reehhh wooooi

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  8. THIS IS ON POINT DOT COMMMMMM...

    U GOT MAAAARRRRD TALENNNNT...

    SABRINA...XXX

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  9. That was heavy! Le Fin means The End though!

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  10. yeah it the ends
    WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?

    HEAVIEST STORY EVA

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  11. Its Shawna! I know it is

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  12. so rochelle was gavins lawyer???
    swear downnnnnnnn
    ahhh i loved this story!! every bit from start 2 finish its jus 2222 sickkkk!
    i might start readin it again looool

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  13. has any1 tried to email dat rochelle hotmail see if she warn link looool

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  14. rahhhh boi this was gd had me hookd all readin it on buses n ting u have a serious talent

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  15. Arrrgh! It's rochelle! And gavin is banged up n suspision of killin tripti! Lol @ 'i looked at the driver and I said.........I don't know you' haha. Routine check, I didn't take this route to get checked.....haha, love the writin style. Next please!

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  16. DID ANYBODY CLOCK THE LINK AT THE BOTTOM OF THE POST? sOME YOUTUBE VIDEO ABOUT KNIFE CRIME!
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qkXXwq0h6qc

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  17. CAN YOU HURRY UP PLEASE I NEED MORE BEEN WAITIN DAYS FOR THE NEXT PART.
    I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS

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  18. if yooh highlight the bit right at the end there is some writing there i dont get...sumthing about nomi in a wheelchair and a gun and it says "one down, one to go" SSK Maybe..??...wanting to get rid of nomi & rochelle prehaps...??
    Please hurry and write some more please...this is more addictive than Gossip Girl...I Wanna Know More..!!

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  19. Read the end bit Nomi dies!

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  20. Hightlight the section at the bottom where u see random words and letters.

    Clever

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  21. in chapter 15 of rochelle sket when i thought it had ended i was complaining dat it was a shit cliff hanger but now Nomi ends with a cliffhanger im dying to find out what happens,i wanna know who shot her and how Rochelle managed to get back into london when everyone tinks shes dead and SHAME ON GAVIN AND TRIPTI.
    Serves them both right for havin an affair
    and shame on faisal and his boys dey deserved it, when it comes to darren im not sure whether to hate him or love him for arranging to have faisal and dem lot killed.
    i love when nomi makes faisal suck the gun but its deep when he stabs her
    wouldnt it be bangin if nomi and rochelle met- theyre practically sisters cos nomis grandad was wockin rochelles granma

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  22. the idea to put the subliminal ting at the end shows how sick this writer is and i wouldnt be suprised if in a couple of years this writer is doing major shit because ideas like that cant be taught
    jus when u think something is goingone way- the writer kicks you in a different situation and to be honest i was sitin behind my computer jumpin up and down being scared in the part where grandad dies- i actually shed a tear cos he was a good man and even tho shirley was a bitch for saying nuthin when she knew rochelle was bein abused u can tell that she regretted it when she was talkin to nomi about what it means to be a wife- and u can tell how much shirley truly loved rupert so when he died it was deep.

    when it comes to tripti-HAHA- dutty slag, next time dont fuck wiv married men so in a way she got what she deserved, when it comes to Rochelle coming back- i fink shes able to come back cos maybe Omara got exposed for being a corrupt officer BUT ssk are stillin pen and we dontknow whether darren is still reppin it for dem cos if he is maybe hes the one that killed nomi.


    deep story.
    even sicker writing style
    "routine check i didnt take this route to be checked" deep

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  23. Frenchyfrench:

    Well I have been addicted to this story, as a read all of it in less than one week!!

    Its sooooo gooood, luv it!!

    By the way you can just write "Fin" instead of "LA fin"...

    It doesnt change anything this story is fuckin gooooooooood!!

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  24. OMG NAOMI DIED ; NOW THERE AFTER ROCHELLE LOL

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  25. plz hurry with the next installment ive been waiting for a week now

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  26. listen whoever is writing dis...talk to someone about making this into a mini dram series coz im flippin hooked

    and also dont let it end there it cant...darren is still alive and knows rochelle is alive...he needs to go after her...hell u shud keep dis runnin until rochelles lil sister michelle gets big and carrys on the sket trend...lol

    more pleeeeeeeeeeeease x

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  27. you know what i fink, i tink we shld promote da story on facebook cos even tho its big i dnt fink its as Big as it culd be, it was shittin on keisha sket from chapter 1 and made eastenders look like a joke by chapter 4, im seriously gonna send da link to all my email contacts so maybe with even more supporters the writer mite even continue it cos da fing is i NEED TO KNOW who killed nomi and what darren will do to chelle- i mean he mustve gone pen for killin faisal but someone obviously killed nomi and wants somebody else too.

    here are my posisble suspects
    Tripti's brother.
    Monique.
    Darren.

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  28. yeah i fink da best ting is to sendthe link to email contacts cos dis story is too underated for my likin- i mean da way nomi and rochelle are connected.

    nomi's grandad is rochelle's grandmas mum.
    nomi's best friend was fucking rochelle's councillors husband.
    nomi fucked jermaine who used to fuck sherice who is rochelle's ex-bf.
    nomi went to the school where rochelle gave a speech.

    i wish nomi and rochelle met tho- it would have been deep if they had a fight- who would win.

    actually dats a good question-

    WHO'D WIN AFIGHT?
    NOMI VS ROCHELLE

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  29. I CANT BELIEVE nomi shot the fat bre lmao, shes a bitch tho- i mean da way she set up tripti like no mans business but the ting is yeah in a way its weird cos nomi fucked jermaine who fucked sherice who set rochelle up to get gangraped and tortured by ssk who jermaine was a part of, so in a way jermaine got what he deserved and tripti got what she deserved for sleeping with silly sandra's man.


    i wonder what sandra finks of all this

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  30. I think its fucked up mayne, this is the only blog I've ever read and boiiii ----> its disturbing but I can't look away! looooooooooool...I really hope this kinda shit don't happen to an individual - its depressing. I dnt get the end either wa gwan...can some1 explain please!!

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  31. The End? R U KIDDING ME?

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  32. im glad this story has ended cos it was gettin a bit too good lol and i have crsework due
    the thing with this story is that its actually making sense girls who are abused as kids like rochelle usually end up being promiscuos thats what happened to Oprah.

    the thing i didnt like is that i felt that tripti died-yeah she shldnt have been fuckin married men but isnt lickin batty- doin rainbow kisses and enjoyin gangbangs worse.


    i am desperate to know who shot nomi and what sandra is up too- i mean shes now raisin the twins alone and i cld someone explain how rochelle and michelle are sisters.

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  33. How long till the next chapter?????

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  34. Michelle and rochelle are sisters because they have the same dad, so they are half-sisters. Bring on the next connecting arc.

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  35. no fuckin way omgggggg this is 222222222222 muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh omggggggggggggg omggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg seriously thats how much i cant get over it
    .so nomi or naomi may or may not be dead like rochelle and her 9 lives

    .ended faisal THANK U that motherfucker was gettin on my nerves!

    .sick ones how can Gavin be in jail doe der was no proof he killed the asian lesbian unless he is on remand

    and sorry to say i dont believe in abortion but rochelles mum shud have got one or swallowed coz nuff ppl hve been dupied over her existense lol

    but i rate u tho the way everythin is interlinked

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  36. no this story is done i have to go and do my assignments kmt lol no procastinatin anymore damn!

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  37. so i take it this is the end

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  38. PEOPLE THE STORY ISNT FINISHED! HIGHLIGHT THE BLANK AREA AT THE END OF THE STORY....THERES HIDDEN TEXT!!

    PLEASE....I NEED MORE!!! THIS IS FANTASTIC!!!

    IVE READ ALL OF THIS IN ONE NIGHT!!!!! WOW!

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  39. I really dont think Nomi or Rochelle deserved what happened to them, but i dont think Nomi is dead it jus said she got shot and now Rochelle is back she and Nomi might become a duo,all the other sket tales are a joke compared to dis


    rochelle sket is like the michael jackson and beyoncey of the sket tales and the rest are like the cassies and ciaras.

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  40. omg yesterday there was a new post where has it gone???????????

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  41. I Know why sorcha got deleted- cos its actually real- i dont fink the writer of rochelle sket mus have been allowed to rite about it cos it happend cos i was at dat party it was describin- the chicks name wasnt sorcha and the guy wasnt nigerian but to put a long ting short that "sorcha" chick is out of ends now lol. i cudnt believe it when i was readin it-

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  42. found a new sket story lmao
    www.dianeslosh.blogspot.com

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  43. DIS IS 22222 MUCH..!!.. I LOVE IT..!!..
    WHEN IS SHE MAKIN THE NEXT CHAPTER SHE NEEDS TO DO IT FAST ASAP ASAP MAN LOOOOOL...
    NAH BUH FOR REAL HU EVA WROTE DIS HAS GOT SUM REAL TALENT..!!.. IF I WOZ A PUBLISHER I WUD DEFINATELTY TAKE DIS PERSON ON N MAKE DEM BIG..!!..
    HIGHLY RATEEED BY MEEEE BOII...!!
    PLZ WRITE MORE PLZ PLZ PLZ!!

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  44. WHEN ARE THE NEW ONES COMMING!!!

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  45. have u lot read dianeslosh lmao

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  46. If you highlight da bottom there is another paragraph :D

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  47. WOW... u need 2 publish this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  48. yeh dianalosh is a poor version of this and POINTLESS.

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  49. OMG jus highlighted the end!!!! Canny wait 4 the next 1 weneva that cums out!

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  50. Raaaah - wot a ting a gwan ee!
    Me jus spen de whole day a read dis SIN-TING, is dat how life a run wit de yout gal dem - well me can wait for de res :O

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  51. i like this story but it is tooooooooo disturbing, is this jus a story or is it actually tru sum1 plz answer

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  52. Omg i obviously found this late i just spent the whole day reading it all. Please say its not over this could be running longer then eastender!!!!! and loving the bit at the end about the wheelchair!!!!

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  53. OHH MYYY DAYZ..the hidden text right on top of the comments appers when highlighted..Ammmazin'...!!!

    im wonderin is this a young chick writing these blogs or an adult, cos its ARRRD...

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  54. i need too read the neww onee mann gettin bree siik

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  55. ok now this is serious where is part 14, 15 and 16? i knw i'm late in finding this but this is crazy - how can it go straight to part 17,, or is it meant to??

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  56. if u highlight the bottom of the story it continues

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