Saturday 17 October 2009

Nomi 12 part 2

"I think its important you all get to nomi a little better."
I looked as Shirley was sobbing, they had gagged her and the steam from the kettle was so hot i could feel it cleaning out my pores.
"bet you werent expectin us you fuckin slag," one of faisals boys said.
Grandad said, "please dont hurt us- what do you want."
"shut the fuck up nigger!", faisal said, "before i just pour this water on this bitches head like shes a tetley tea bag."

"please-" i said, "why are you doin this?".
"Darren got one of our bres- he knows everything- he said u told him this morning about me tryna set him up so hes got one of our bres- he wants a grand," faisal said bare angry.
"you want money?", grandad said, "w-we have money- please dont hurt us."
"thats more like it," faisal said, "ahmed- go with him to get the money."
the fat guy with the hairy boobs followed grandad upstairs.

"faisal please leave her alone," i pleaded.
"shes your grandma innit?".
"no but shes like one to me- please leave her alone- its me you want."
then i saw faisal turn to a picture, "oh my fuckin gosh- your dat skets nan- your rochelles nan."
shirley burst into tears.
"SHUT UP!", Faisal screamed and then poured a bit of the water on her head, shirley screamed.
i started cryin, "faisal no- please- grandads getting u the money."

"yeah where the fuck is he?", one of the other bres said.
"ahmed where the fuck are you ?!".
all of a sudden i turned to see ahmed role down the stairs and grandad standing at his feet with a rifle in his hand.
"You tink u can fuck wit me," he said pointin the rifle at faisal, "you can pour de water on me womans head- but believe me burns heals- a bullet in your bludklut may not."
Faisal looked shook and said to his boys in arabic, "get behind me."

"ill fuckin pour the water on her head- ill pour it in her eyes."
shirley sobbed, faisal poured more water on her head, "NO", i jumped over shirleys head and flykicked faisal into his boys who then fell onto the wall, the boiling water fell to the ground, I untied shirley bare quick but jus as she was about to get up, faisal kicked my face, i fell back.
"Boy you done did it now," grandad said.
just as he was about to pull the trigger, he held his chest. "RUPERT!", shirley screamed, he fell to the ground holdin his chest.
"mans fuckin havin a heart attack," faisal laughed, he grabbed shirley, "look at your old man- if your anythin like your grandaughter youllbe wantin a young man like me innit," he touched her breast, she sobbed. "rupert" she called.
i ran to grandad and tried to help him up but he couldnt i could see his face turnin red, the left side of his face was droopin and he was havin a slight spasm, "grandad," i sobbed, i looked up to see faisal kissing shirleys neck.
I picked up the rifle and pointed it at him, "let her fucking go" i said gently trying my best to ignore when grandad stopped movin.
"u cant use a rifle you dum slut- anyway if you shoot me- youll end up hittin the skets nan."

then i pointed the rifle at ahmed who was slowly beginning to wake up, "let shirley go or ill shoot dis fat prick rite now."
faisal pushed shirley to the ground, as she tried to crawl to the phone he kicked her and put his foot on her back, she began to pray.
"let her go," i said, "faisal i swear to God i will put a hole in your chest- let her go."
"your bluffin- u cant shoot shit," he laughed.
i could taste the anger in my sweat and could see grandads dead body from the corner of my eye. everytin went red.
"pussy o."

BAM.

18 comments:

  1. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO....

    MOREEEEEEEE!!!!!

    DESE STORIES R EMOSHHHH

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  2. omg grandad, noooooooo! MORE!!!!!!!!!

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  3. When is anything good going to happen? Ber innocent people getting hurt! Them Fasial boys are narsty how they gonna sexually assualt a granny! Come on make them get caught, sent to jail and fucked by SSK! LOL

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  4. they're muslim, that's how!!!

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  5. shut uppppppppppppppppp!!!!!!! hard hard hard

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  6. dis is gettin interestin!!!!! N e ways fuk da whole of "SSK" and fuk all dese Muslim/Somali pricks! PECKNARM ALL FUCKING DAY!!!! PYG,SI,OPB!!!!!!! My Niggas in da narm stand up!!!

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  7. Anonymous said...
    they're muslim, that's how!!!
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    U fucking dumb fuck. fuck you.

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  8. llow the racism init peace nd love!

    the story is going in hard . whats gna happn next u neva knw.

    buh hol up a sec why she still rolling wid dese ediats when the gang raped her they need 2 get murkedd

    130 follwers u doing suttin right to kp us hooked kp it going

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  9. same ppl thats stereotyping muslims n somalians bes not fuckin complain when it happens to them if their dumb arses even try look for a job.

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  10. I didnt hear anyone screaming racism when the black characters were given bad press- if muslims dont want bad press then they shouldnt bomb shit- and of course if black people dont want bad press then something needsto be done to stop these wasteboys from shankin up everything in sight,

    this story is tryin to show us that the world is bigger than the violent streets of london which is why shawna is in quebec- shes escaping it all.
    the reason the person above me got offended is because muslims are the biggest hypocrites and faisal embodies that- he talks about the koran but then organises a gang rape.
    cha!

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  11. the person above me mi love ya bad you just put it straight n it mek a lot ov sense fi real you have muslims out der dat r jus exposing the name full a talk but not walkin the walk but for real it not bout unnu mussys yea it bout dis bloodclrt story dat a mix up nd it bad 2 fuk! mi love wen grndaddy a seh.....You tink u can fuck wit me,you can pour de water on me womans head- but believe me burns heals- a bullet in your bludklut may not."
    story sell orrrf to raassss....grandady hav fi get up nd cut out him eye!! lol

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  12. This story is about not judging people.
    think about it- both rochele and nomi are hoes but are willing to die and kill for the people they love.
    rochelle fought daniel AND sherice in the same hour just to protect the twins and then "died" saving michelle.
    nomi hasnt even know shirley longer than a week and shes about 2 shoot faisal who shes known for longer for her.
    if you notice too- that antoine in rochellesket is gay but hes a nice person- the story is sayin dat u shldnt judge someone without gettin to know them- if u had seen antoine on the streed ud say euuh batty man but he ends up saving rochelle and ultimately the twins
    i like how shawna is bare wise and works her way out of the whole situation and how the female unity- look how close sandra and rochelle were and now howclose shirley and nomi are.

    sad about tripti tho bt serves her rite for fuckin a married man whose wife is expecting a baby- as for sherice shes a backstabbin hoe, for me this story is trying to say dont judge people and that you can work your way out of these filthy and lawless streets.

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  13. tru dat tru dat uno.
    whose your fav character in da entire story, for me it has to be Monique and Antoinette and Grandad for that "bullet in the bludklut" quote

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  14. i come from MK and when i go to any part of london i get intimidated by the black boys from all areas and thwe girls are worse. how can you tell someone that u cant pass this street coz its not your postcode thats stupid this is not america. i dont understand people's concept these days. if you want to rule a patch of land go get a job and buy a house. i also don't understand how we are killin our own. don't people feel the hurt for what our slave grandparents went through to get us to this freedom and people are just goin around takin it for granted. and as for somalians i rwally don't have anything to say i have not once come across a decent one. don't get me wrong i am not sayin there is not any out there but they don't give a good impression. these are the reasons why bnp have got two seats in parliment. they see this as the perfect time to deal with us whilst we are at war with ourselves they will have the chance to attack.

    i really hope the shit that i have read on this blog is not true but it is a real eye opener to the streets of london

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  15. WOW...... MAYBE U LOT POSTING THE COMMENTS SHOULD WRITE A BOOK!! U LOT ARE GETTIN MORE INTERESTING DEN NOMI SKET!! IM FEELING ALL DA ISH U GUYS ARE SAYIN!!

    CHYNESE

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  16. Lool at wat the person sed above me

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  17. Ok noone should be sterotyping anyonn
    You say muslim and people automatically think asian terrorists and that's not always the case
    There are black muslims out there and tthey as offended as all the asian muslims
    That comment saying 'their muslim that's ho you are completely wrong and I know that you were tryna be funny but that tragically failed for you so I beg don't say anything else coz that is rally offensive
    At the end of the day see people for what they are before you start judging
    Its true that I aint actually come across aa good somalian but there are decent somalians out there even if we're never to come across one

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  18. LOOK AT ALL DIS SHIT GOIN ON IN DA WORLD ARAND U AND TRY MAKIN URSELF A BETTA PERSON INSTED OF PUTTIN DWN UVA'Z. PEACE OUT! T

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