Thursday 20 August 2009

Chapter 7.

12 BlackPrince Road.
I was there outside of my nan's house.
At first I was going to walk away but then I just knocked.
It was opened by some man, "I'm lookin for my nan,"I said.
The man wiv da dutty teet and hair looked me up and down and said, "She knew you'd come."
I walked into da house, it smelled of cheap candles and all da curtains were closed so da first fing I saw when i walked into her front room was her shadow.
"I knew that pain in me chest was for a reason."
When she said that- her face turned bare disgusting and den she said,"You come to talk?".
"Yeah."
"Then sit child," she looked at da man and said, "Rupert go to bed." The man nodded and ran up de stairs, LAAAAAAAAAAYTER! Nan got niggers on lock.
"Your mudder told me what u did wit dat african." she said, "fucking you own mudda's man- what a fucking whore!."
I said nuthin and just looked at her gray hair, her tits were down to her knees in her purple nightrobe. "You know u da reason your parent seperate?".
"What do you mean?", I asked.
"Your mudda hated your father for what he told her about you- dats why she kicked him out."
"He left!".
"He knew what you were like- u tried to seduce him."
"He abused me."
"YOU TRIED TO SEDUCE HIM."
"I was 7- that's disgusting!."
"He knew you were a whore and he told your mudda and she couldn't see it- but now you bein a dutty whore has killed her."
"Fuck you- you dusty bitch- how can you defend da man who abused me- how can you and my mum know he was doin dat and say nuffin."
"You tried to seduce him."
"I was a little girl- you know i never did that- it was just easier to ignore innit!."
"GOD TOLD ME YOU WERE A WHORE!".
"In that Church of yours- fuck you!" I got up and as I went to leave, she threw some water on me.
"HOLY WATER!", she screamed. So I punched the bitch and ran out of the house.
As i was making my way back to the bus stop, a Ford Fiesta started going slow near me. The car window rolled down.
"Allo saxy!" said da white guy who was drivin, "You want a lift."
"No fanks," I said.
"Ah cam on lav- me and my friend have never fucked a nigger before- we'll pay you."
Then I stopped and looked at the car.
"How much?!," I asked.
The guy looked at his friend and then looked to me and sed, "5 Bills if you suck us off and anuva 10 bills if you let us meet up with some of da ova lads and do a group fuck."
I got in the car.
The guy who was drivin had a bald head and a cross at the back of it- he looked about 30- a bit like Phil Mitchell init and the second was a BOOM TING- I couldn't wait to fuck him.
"So you ever fucked a white guy before?", the boom ting asked.
"Yeah."
"By tha way my names Jake and dis is 'Arry".
"Hi Jake and Harry-" i said bein bare sexy, "How many ova guys are comin."
As I said dat the car stopped at a garage. We got out of da car and I left my suitcase in it. 'Arry knocked on da garage door. It opened.
All i see was pyear white man fixin cars.
"Brought some entertainment lads."
"A fuckin nigger bitch!" i heard one say and den I got scared. The garage door closed.
'Arry grabbed my pussy and said,"get on your knees." As I did, I noticed a BNP sign on the wall.
I forgot what it stood for but i knew it wasn't good.
I started suckin da gay as all the ova bres started watchin. I wanted to stop it, but now Jake was wankin over my head.
I started hearin, "I can't wait till fuck dis nigger!!" and "fucking baboon." I was scared. this couldn't happen to me again. As I was suckin on da guys dick,my eyes noticed a fire exit and a way dat i could get past da ten guys . I stopped suckin and said, "Why don't one of you put me on the car and take turns in bangin the shit out of me."
"Walk to the car den you fackin nigger,."
I walked slowly to the car and then dussed out of the fire exit. It led me to a back road, SHIT! my suitcase was in the car but i didn't give two fucks, i just kept dussin, I ran into the road.
BAM.
The car lick me down.

I was still concious as the guy jumped out of the Black BMW and pulled me into the car.

38 comments:

  1. You can't seriously leave me hanging??

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  2. how comes this chapter doesnt have as much detail as the others?

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  3. I'm baffed! Lost for words with all the chapters? Can't understand why a young girl like you is going through this madness? You need a sanctuary!

    Please tell me you've seeked help? Or is this all a joke!?

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  4. I dont think this is real to be honest, not any more anyway..... but still keep em comin!

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  5. L0L this is sooo fake, but a very good read, add more soon!!!!

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  6. Quotables for days bitch. Post everyday.

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  7. I think dis should b turned into a mini series...as xplicite as d sexual parts r d storyline as actualy much mur intrestin...I can tell its fake but I comend d level of ur imagination

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  8. OMMIZZZAALLL LOOOOOOOL

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  9. post everyday da storyline is too good....fake but good...i agree it shud be made into a lil late night series...keep em coming

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  10. You should have a book deal - fuck Harry Potter! Seriously, make your fairytales make you some £££

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  11. omg dis is sum grippinn tho disturbing stuff, it cnt be real if it is im surprised dat dis chick aint gone mad already.

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  12. OMG IZ DAT IT MORRE

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  13. yeah this is fake, cos one part sed suttin bout her caramel skin, then next fing its like she looks a like a dark version of whover! neways this was a good read

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  14. oh yeah AND i see the author is inspired by the vixen diaries/confessions of a video vixen - to a extent.....

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  15. HAHA
    WHOS MORE OF A SKET?
    KEISHA OR ROCHELLE?

    AND IF YOU THINK THIS IS REAL THEN BOY YOUR VERY NAIVE.

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  16. I am a publisher for the old series of grafters (ITV 2004).

    I have read this and think it would be of interest to a partner of mine. If at all you would be interested in hearing anymore potential details, please email to

    david.brumley@hotmail.co.uk

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  17. we've been waiting ages for the 8th chapter......hurry up lol

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  18. Keep em coming!!!!!

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  19. im sorry this cant be real...its good doe...i cudnt stop reading & now im w8in 4 chapter 8...hu ever wrote this needs 2 seriously think bout makin it into a book or tv series or sutum!!

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  20. UPLOIAD DAA NEX TIN

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  21. This chapter was bare short :-(

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  22. WHERE IS CHAPTER 8????????? QUICK NUH MAN!

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  23. Girl u need to hurry up n do chapter 8!!!

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  24. Chapter 8 pls........

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  25. toooo funny, when the next one comin out?

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  26. can tell its fake as no1 would break there nose in 18n places have cosmetic surgery then leave the hospital the next day...dats bull...also few other things dat make it really unrealistic....one of them being that for a girl that has supposed to of had so much sex dose'nt know the diffrence between her clit and her well...mmm well how do i say dis...erm...whole..lol... also the way the docor would of spoken to her would of been with alot more symathy...good read doe...the end got really unrealistic but with a bit of tweaking dis would be a good book

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  27. haha although this is clearly not real, it's sick. It needs to be made into a film!

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  28. http://couldthisreallybehappeningtome.blogspot.com/2009/08/was-it-too-soon.html?showComment=1252329794290#c1280516287382862967

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  29. She MUST have caught somethin by now, or she's pregnant. Story started off gud den got a bit random and fake. Still wanna read da next chapter tho...

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  30. ^^That David brumley guy just wants a shag. Lol

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  31. someone needs to give this hoe a break she is going through alot! shitttt!!!!!

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  32. "I noticed a BNP sign on the wall.
    I forgot what it stood for but i knew it wasn't good."

    LMAO

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  33. "I noticed a BNP sign on the wall.
    I forgot what it stood for but i knew it wasn't good."

    I was creasing at that part too; how naive can this girl get?! Nah this definitely ain't real but is very imaginative and most definitely has the potential to be made into a series. Keep them coming writer cos you've got me hooked!

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  34. she dint no wot BNP stood forr wot the hell she aint blackk did the fact tht the white guys callin her a nigga not giv it away....edddiat

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  35. i used 2 live on blackprince road :D storys addictive man

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  36. "LAAAAAAAAAAYTER! Nan got niggers on lock." LOOOOL! hahaha that's rich man!

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