Monday 11 January 2010

Rochelle SKET the end.

I looked at her and she gave me one look.
"we need to get out of here- its gonna burn- the whole fing is gonna burn," i screamed.
then she said, "you're not suprised to see me."
i punched her and tried to run past, but she pulled me by hair and threw me on the stairs.
i knew i wouldnt have the stregnth to fight. "i went to pen for you you dumb bitch- faking like you were dead, now everyone knows about you and O'mara, i'm out- me kieran and rico are out."
and then i thort about michelle and i looked up at her and said, "kill me monique- im tired of all this."
then she punched my face, she was crazy, it was like she culdnt even smell the fire, all of a sudden i heard a ping and i knew it was her BlackBerry, she ignored it and headbutted me. "dont ever fucking tell me what to do," she said, "there's ambulances, fire brigades and police outside and they're gonna come in to find ur dead body on these stairs- who else is up there?".


"I'm never gonna stop making you pay for making daniel do what he did to kieran- dirty chich, how you lied to daniel about kieran being gay- this is what caused all of this u hoe." then she screamed and smacked me in the pussy.

i didnt say nuthin, she spat in my face and kicked me in the forehead, all of a sudden i heard glass smashing and bare noise coming from outside and then i saw the fear in Monique's face and then she laughed. she pulled out a rope from her backpocket and punched me about, then kicked me in the pussy. she tied up my hands and feet, i tried to fight her off but i was too tired and then when i wasnt able to move, she looked at me and said, "now you can bun in the same way we're gonna make that chichi man ladyboy antoinette bun."
then she ran off.
and then i felt bare heat, and i could smell fire and then i could feel the heat in my chest and then i felt myself burning. i was burning and i could feel it tearing me up.




Michelle:
I looked up at the burning building and cried, i was in the back of the police car with a police lady who was holding my hand. "michelle i need you to think," she said, "how many people are in the building," and i looked up at it and the way it was burning and the way i could see rochelle burning in my head and i said, "they're gonna die,"
and the police lady said, "michelle- who was in the building with you."
and then i looked at her and said, "wheres my mum?", i wiped my eyes and she looked at me and said nothing and put my head to her chest and said, "you're going to be alright- we'll find someone to look after you."
and then i knew what she meant and i pulled myself away from her and looked up at the building and said, "it was me,my dad and nomi."
the police lady looked at me and asked me to repeat myself.
"me, my dad and....nomi."
"and thats it."
"yeah," i said, then i saw her rush out of the car and speak to another police guy who was trying to stop people from getting too close to the fire and then i started to wish rochelle was burning slowly and that the fire was eating her alive because it was her who started all of this.
and then i saw a man walk over to the police lady and show her a card and then she walked over to me and and opened the door, "michelle- this man is going to take you to a warm place, alright- he's a social worker and will make sure you're alright and in the morning i'll come and see you."

"but i dont wanna go," i said,"i need to stay to see if roch-" and then i stopped, i didnt want to see if rochelle was alive or not, dat hoe was dead to me and so i got out of the car and the black man said hello.
he said something to the police lady and signed something and took me to a car, he opened the door for me and put me in the backseat.
i sat there sobbing,
"its alright," the man said getting into the drivers seat.he took off his blazer and was wearing a black t-shirt and on his arm was a tatoo.

badmanforwardbadmanpullup.

29 comments:

  1. AAAAAAAAAAAAH rico kidnapped michelle. sickest ending ever!!!!
    lmao, i thrt the ending was gonna be shit, this is deep.

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  2. eh yeah yeah yeah yeah
    this is hard
    so hard
    so hard
    so hard
    that rochelle sket rain just wont let up!

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  3. wait!so rico kidnapped michelle, this better continue into the new sket memoir cos i wanna see how michelle turns out, its deep how michelles an orphan now and how she hates rochelle but hey kinda serves rochelle right for lying about kieran being gay cos that is a violation and wat about antoin-ette, is monique gonna get him too.,

    a short but impressive ennding- i was thinking it was gonna be so shit but u proved me wrong. well done

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  4. as much as rochelle changed and learnt from her lessons i cant help but saying haha at her death because she used a taboo in black culture like someone being gay and manipulated it and twisted it to get revenge on a guy SHE was dumb enough to let film her.
    its just sad that nomi, michelles mum, rochelles grandad, rochelle's mum, faisal and the 40 thieves, tripti and James ALL had to die cos rochelle couldnt keep her legs closed.

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  5. LMAO at faisal and the 40 thieves, LMAO LMAO cos theyre arab but tru say it didnt say that tripti died. looking forward to deena- i just hope it stays real and gritty like the beginning of rochelle was, cos the ending went on some die hard with vengeance flex, tru say i was expecting xena to pop out of nowhere and start scuffin with rochelle and nomi,

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  6. does someone wanna explain to me once again how nomi, michelle and rochelle are related, i spent the whole of last nite trying to make a mental family tree.

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  7. LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
    ITS RICO.
    u remember from the 2nd chapter when he wrote badmanforwardbadmanpullup@hotmail.com on rochelles arm, culd u imagine how much of her arm that would have taken up,looooooooool, i shldnt lauf that he kidnapped michelle, cos we all know how dirty them ssk mandem go down- did i hear a roof roof?

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  8. maybe rochelle shld think twice about calling people gay next time, u c what gossiping causes, if she had kept her head in her books or focused on a talent (dick sucking doesnt count) she cldve have been in uni or somewhere better than hell (IF SHE IS DEAD), this is why i laugh at the heads in my school who wanna chat my name, whilst there hating, i'm revising so that on results day when i go home balling, they go home bawlin.

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  9. u lot are dread man- rochelle didnt deserve all that- she deserved to die doing what she loved- chokin on a 14 inch jamaican dick.

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  10. deena??? is that the new sket story??? this was gooooooood! who wudda thought that a love n life of sex, lies, and shottin wud cause so much drama. Actually cum 2 fink of it, it always duz lol! Rminds me of dem hoodrat gyal dat used 2 go my skool years ago bt ended up in nuffin bt drama durin skool n evn now wen ther big women SERVES EM RITE! Dis blog was deep! Bring on d nxt sket story!

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  11. Nahhh! this cant b the end! What will happen to Michelle?! Rochelle didn't deserve all of that tho cos it was raw what the SSK crew did to her, but what goes around comes around... I bet Rochelle isnt even dead n she will come back lol Its a gd story and I hope you write many more.

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  12. ok i wont lie, i thrt the ending wldnt live up 2 the start, but the ending came hard.

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  13. GOOD EFFING STUFF.

    SAY NO MORE.

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  14. Love it best story ever!x

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  15. i was kinda hoping we'd see sandra again but maybe not, and thats deep on michelle boi- in a way it was her dad who caused this by abusing rochelle which then messed her up which led to her getting involved with ssk which then led to all this piece a mix up. deena better come hard, cos this will be hard to top.

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  16. ...was looking forward to dis...I wasnt disappointed! Keep up d gd work, cant wait to hear bout deena looool

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  17. THIS IS AMAZING LMAO- wasnt expecting this twist, so rico has kidnapped michelle- sweet september! this is some fuckery- im kind of happy rochelle is dead, shes better off in hell than in the world cos people never stop coming after her.
    ive been reading deena and i hope it stays REAL constitently cos its going well but me na want no big hollywood drama just real hood shit.
    and why the fuck is monique so crazy- she needs to get a life and stop hassling people.

    and i miss antoine and silly sandra- is there a chance that antoine can get his own story.
    MEMOIRS OF A KNIFE WIELDING QUEEN.

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  18. this story is ard. whoever write dis they have got some good imagination. pls write more stories this is addictive

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  19. at least rochelle can rest in PEACE now
    no more hassle Monique and that needs to CALMM down and get on with there life!!
    Poor Girl!!......her fault tho!!
    Good Story :)

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  20. dis shit is nuuttts!! Endin did kinda get a bit phsyco bitch wiv all tha xtra scrappin but still!!!! Wer dis deena cummin frm?? Rochelle dus remind me ov dose jus NE waste road chicks doe but thm man went deep uno n how her dad cums bk....... Ahhhhh its jus crazy! Lol addictive readin! gd stuff gd stuff

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  21. rochelles grandmas not dead

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  22. big big big!!! keep it coming!!!

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  23. I would love to read more this was very good...You should really get paid for your work.... i read thhis in one nite

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  24. Intertwining was very effective, big story. Author has maddd talent.

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  25. DIS WAS FIIIIIIIIRE MAMI (IM ASSUMIN A CHICK WROTE DIS.. TOO GOOD 4 A DUDE :P)
    PUUURE ENTERTAINMENT FOR MA NIGHT SHIFTS AT WORK 4REAL
    U WENT H.A.R.D!!!!

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  26. the story was amazing :), whoever wrote this has some true talent. i loved how you used real life places, it makes the story seem so much more real.
    I feel sorry for michelle, cause her life's still gonna end up shit i also feel sorry for Rochelle she didn"t need to go that way... :(

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  27. NAAA I RATE U SOOOO HIGHLY...
    I HAVE TEARS IN MA EYEYS MAAAN

    I HAD TO COME READ THIS BCOZ I DIDNT UNDERSTAND ALL THE NEW CHARACTERS IN DEENA ND THEIR BACKGROUNDS BT WOW MAAAAN

    EVRYFING MAKES SENCEEEEEEEEE

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  28. NOMI wouldnt be in dis mess if she jus kept her mouth closed rochelle wouldnt be in da mess if nomi kept her mouth closed and if she neva lied and michelle wouldnt be in dis mess if rochelle neva got into her life.

    its a big intertwining storyline..... dis writer is 2 good

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  29. DIS storry is hard i must say i feel sorry for rochelle still but why let some guy record u michelles gonna have some mad life i bet and i read deena aswell and it all jus falls into place sickly u have talent i rate u
    dominique M xx

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