Saturday 9 January 2010

The Final Chapter - Rochelle

I could see from the way tripi was holding the strap that she didnt know what she was doin, so wiv all my might i kicked it out of her hand. Nomi jumped on her and them two started wrestling as i ran to michelle. I could hear fire engines and could smell smoke.
I put Michelle on my back but i fell to the ground,my back was fucked up and i was feelin a dirty pain in my head. i could feel my nose bleeding, michelle screamed and called my name.
"michelle go now!," i said, "i can hear fire engines, run down and if u see fire duss the other way."
michelle kissed my head and ran passed nomi and tripti fighting to get the gun.
i tried to get up slowly but everytime i did i fell.
i saw nomi kick Tripti in the face.
then i could smell the fire.
I got up slowly and wipe the blood off of my nose.
"we have to get out of here," i said.
Nomi picked up the gun and held it at Tripti.
"Nomi don't do it," i said.
"whats the fucking point?!,"she said, "we're gonna die anyway."
then she pulled the trigger.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!".









Nomi fell to the floor.
I screamed, it was dad- his face was burnt up, he pulled the knife out of Nomis back.
Tripti walked back slowly.
i looked at him, he waslimping towards me, he was naked- his skin was hangingoff him, his face looked like he had spent the summer in Tanarife.
he was speaking but his mouth was too burnt, i could hear what he was saying, i started to feel dizzy- the pain in ma head was coming back. Tripti ran and picked up the gun and said, "im gonna shoot the both of you."

I looked down at Nomi, she was covered in blood, she was dead.Tripti fired two shots at her and laughed and then turned the gun at me, jus as i saw her hand get ready to shoot again,i pulled dad in front ofme.
i heard the bullets pierce into his flesh and then i threw his body onto tripti. his burnt body was on top of her,she was screaming. i ran out and made my way to the stairs.
i could smell the fire getting clse,i could hear the firealarms and i cld hear a man saying, "stay where u are," but i cldnt see where he was saying it from.
i could hear footsteps running towards me and i thanked God, it was someone to save me.

the steps were coming towards me from down the stairs, but they sounded like heels and when it got to me, i knew it wasnt a man but a chick.
"You didn't think you'd see me again."
It was Monique.
Monique.


To be continued on 11/1/10

8 comments:

  1. OMFG
    OMFG
    OMFG
    OMFG
    TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FUCKING ARD.
    TOOO FUCKIN ARD.
    Just when i thrt my girl was safe.

    ReplyDelete
  2. whos monique again? is dat the ladyboy?

    ReplyDelete
  3. Woooooow boooi.....dead people comin up from nowhere...miss e™

    ReplyDelete
  4. OMFG- lmao monique looooool- shit boy- rochelle cant catch a break, from one person out to kill her to another.

    ReplyDelete
  5. :o IT'S LIKE THRILLER DEAD PEEPS POPING UP LEFT RIGT N CENTER
    DIZZ IS ARRRRD
    WELL DONE :) X

    ReplyDelete
  6. aaaaaaaaaah just gets better and better.
    man this girls had some bad life, i just hope this is fake and if it is the person that wrote this has good writting skills you know.

    ReplyDelete
  7. WoW im actually late for work but i dont giv a fuck!!!!! this shit is like crack!!! an im feinding for my next FIX.

    ReplyDelete
  8. lawd have mercy why i svery1 coming back man soon we'll see every1 coming in on ropes and shit for rochelle LOL good story though

    ReplyDelete